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People like emotions that fit into boxes. Sad, but not too sad. Hurting, but not broken. Lost, but not beyond saving.

These were the lines that were the best for me .

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That- that was stunningly beautiful. It’s relatable down to the core really. I mean I’m jealous how can you grasp the concept of writing the piece all together. The transition had me thinking stuff I usually don’t think about honestly. The way you describe adapting and then faking it out, somewhere deep down made me realise that at micro levels we all do it. We all do it for people we care about , but we do it altogether for our own satisfaction, our own sanity until we realise deep down how wrong it is.

Now I realise that we write poetry altogether to just escape reality, to show in ways people consider art, but deep down we know how the piece, how each word echoes through us.

Great work! Keep writing these thought provoking pieces.

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