“wrapped in a quiet that does not ask for more” my fav line describing a state of just being or a moment of true peace that is almost a privilege these days <3
Beautifully written🌹. If I met the earlier version of the girl who wrote it I would give her hug but now that I can't i will give it you, so raw but so beautiful.
I was afraid the meaning might slip away, but you caught it...and that means everything. thank you so much! would love to know what you think of my other poems too <3
Hey it’s beautiful piece, the time gap makes it even rawer than before. The was you describe the feeling of longing, and how much you clutch on to that one moment and place is too good.
“wrapped in a quiet that does not ask for more” my fav line describing a state of just being or a moment of true peace that is almost a privilege these days <3
glad you liked it:)
true peace really is a rare privilege. thanks for reading<3
Reminds me of a friend I made in other city. Sadly I had to move, we are in contact but it's not the same. Such a beautiful piece!
I feel you! distance changes people but it also shows who really stays <3 thanks for reading, it means a lot!!
Beautifully written🌹. If I met the earlier version of the girl who wrote it I would give her hug but now that I can't i will give it you, so raw but so beautiful.
Aww, thank you, means a lot!🫶🏼 Sending a hug your way!!
‘Speaking only of things that do not wound,
here, where endings do not knock at the door,
where nothing is lost, and nothing is torn.’
This part gives it away for me, beautiful writing!
I was afraid the meaning might slip away, but you caught it...and that means everything. thank you so much! would love to know what you think of my other poems too <3
Sure sure !
Hey it’s beautiful piece, the time gap makes it even rawer than before. The was you describe the feeling of longing, and how much you clutch on to that one moment and place is too good.
Thank you so much. It truly means a lot ✨