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This poem feels so personal. We’re all in the same boat, trying to quiet that inner voice that tells us we’re not enough. And this piece? It hit like one of those tears that never roll down your face but stay behind, just to remind you of everything you’ve carried. It’s raw, real, and achingly human, the kind of poem that aches quietly and completely.

I love the last line a little too much. It speaks of something in the future, something we haven’t reached yet, but something that still keeps us going. 'When I finally reach the shore, I can proudly say, it's ME, it's ME and nothing else, I've built it from scratch, no miracles.' There’s hope in it. I loved how you summed up the ending. This poem breaks you in all the right places, but somehow, in the end, you send everyone home with a tight hug and a bright smile.

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Jude's avatar

Hope we all get better soon Pri ✌🏻

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