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Breanna's avatar

I love it !! It came at the perfect time too 👏👏

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Pri's avatar

glad you liked it <3

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Sofia's avatar

Thank you for the permission my entire body felt I needed externally. Your piece has helped free me a little more.

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Pri's avatar

that means a lot. I’m glad it helped ❤️‍🩹

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sukhi's avatar

“When you’ve had to fight for everything, you forget how to accept peace without suspicion” so true

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Ankita Jason's avatar

giving you the biggest hug 🫂 i hope your days only get easier. even if the path isn't exactly linear, it's only getting better. this was so beautifully written.

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Pri's avatar

Aww thank you Ankita 🫂💛

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Letters From The Ether's avatar

I really needed this. Thank you.

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Pri's avatar

I'm so glad it helped ❤️‍🩹 thank you!!

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Alina's avatar

I feel like giving u a hug. I share your experience, thank you for giving words to my feelings.🙏🏼

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Pri's avatar

thank youuu , means a lot 🫂

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Geepi's avatar

Loved this. I have written something similar. Please read and subscribe if it resonates:

https://open.substack.com/pub/geepi/p/your-deepest-desire?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android&r=5g16az

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A.'s avatar

It's so well written 🧡🧡🎀

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A.'s avatar

This is the real win. I’m so proud of you for trying. I know it can feel draining at first, but the fact that you’re trying, that’s what matters. I’m so happy.

I love this poem. I actually feel it. I’ve been someone who always believed in Murphy’s Law: “Anything that can go wrong, will go wrong.”

But now, I like to believe, “Why not go right? Why decide the outcome so early?”

Being an optimist feels better than being a pessimist. Or maybe just being neutral? I don’t know, but the phase I’m in right now, I feel so numb, haha.

More love your way for finally trying to make things feel better. I’m sure one day, it’ll feel natural—not like you’re making an effort.

Sending you lots of love🧡🧡

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Pri's avatar

thank youuu Aditi!! what you said really meant a lot.. i truly hope things get better for you too ✨ Sending love and strength 💛

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Fathima Jaleel's avatar

I loveeeee thiisssss♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Pri's avatar

thank youu <33

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Coffee & Stars's avatar

This is the most bittersweet feeling. I always waited for the train to hit, but now I don't anymore. I love this, it's is conveyed so beautifully. I especially love the last two lines about not just surviving it🫶

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